Feedback on our pitch

In this morning's lessons at Coleridge, we all had to do a presentation on the song we wanted to pitch for our music video. We also had to explain our ideas for our second choice, incase we couldn't have our first choice. We were given feedback from everyone in the class.

Feedback on 'Shadows'

"I like the fairy tale theme"

"How are you going to have the eye's watching over her?"

"I like the idea of the ending with the shadow, I think it will look quite abstract."

"Where would you get the setting?"

"I like the Snow White idea, and the rabbit."

"The camera sounds good."

"Who will be in your video?"

"Interesting location."

"Who's rabbit will you be using?"

"Good concept."

"Which location?"

"How are you going to do a clear shadow?"

"I like the idea of a still camera and flashing images."

"How will you get the surreal effect?"

"Setting? Will it be possible?"

"Alice/ Snow White- quite common"

"How is it going to be different?"

"Good research."

"Good video research as well."

"You have permission from the artist."

"Shadow at the end?- Explain more clearly."

"Overall, very good."

"Forest? Location."

"Rabbit?"

"Stop motion effect could work."

"How/where/when would you do it?"

"How will you get the rabbit?"

"Alice in Wonderland and Tim Burton style."

"Good idea."

"Well planned."

"Where? Forest?"

Feedback on 'Wicked Little Girls'

"I like the 1950's style."

"I like how basic it is."

"Costumes?"

"The second idea sounds good."

"Who will act?"

"I like the idea of it being simple."

"Good research into the song."

"Where would you get the white room?"

"The kiss- Contrasts what the song is saying."

"I think that keeping it basic is a good idea."

"Basic- good!!"

"Costume basics- can work with them."

"I like the 1950's theme."

"Simple."

"Easy to carry out."

"How to get the post-war costume?"

"Dancers?"