This is the feedback that we were given for our original treatment idea, before we knew that we would be using 'Shadows' for our music video. Most of the feedback is asking about the rabbit and the location. This was only our first idea, and we decided not to use the rabbit in the end, because it would have been difficult to film with an animal. Also we didn't say what locations we would be filming at, because we were not sure whether or not we were going to get the song.
Class rough-cut feedback
This is the feedback we were given for the rough-cut of our music video. There were lots of positive comments, aswell as some suggestions for improvement. The most common one, was that there was too much spinning, which we cut down a bit, and added other shots into the spinning section, to cut it up a bit. People were watching our video on Vimeo, which was being slow, and the lip-syncing didn't look correct. We also added more cut-aways into our final music video. The majority of the positive comments were about our costume and location, and also about the camera shots we used.
Class digipak feedback
This was the feedback that I was given for my first draft 0f my digipak. I only had 3 comments back, but they were a mixture of positive things, and things that I could improve on. I had only done a small amount of my digipak at the time, so I didn't have much to change, and I could add the improvements as I was working through my digipak.
Final video feedback
This is the feedback that we were given for our final music video. One of the comments, was from a professional music video director, Ben Gee. The feedback was mainly positive, but there was also a couple of comments that suggested that there are still areas we could have improved on. There was one comment that said that the spinning still goes on for too long.
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